Oh yeah! I forgot to mention this before, but I'm generally writing how Andrew sees the world kinda, so the stuff with the like one line paragraphs, are there because he wanted to had more meaning and drama to them in his mind, so he did. Thus they get personal paragraphs and stuff. Also, if anyone has time, could you comment on what you think about my posts so far? I plan on getting one or two more in, and either having Andrew die, or letting Mr. Plot kill him because I didn't get around to it for some reason.....(Ya know, not being lazy or anything silly like that! No, not at Allllll!!!).