@SirBeowulf ULTRA GREATSWORD?! ULTRA GREATSWORD?! That's fine, just sounds like an extra-skill. Endurance isn't really a skill but, it's fine if your character invests in related stats, so you need not change it. Maybe add 'Battle Healing' to the list? You don't really need to change anything if you don't wish to - accepted :) --- ### STAY THE FUCK AWAY FROM MY WIZARD POWERS. --- @HounderHowl You did, although I would have preferred it if you'd posted it here. No matter. Only two points to make in regards to your character: 1. The CS is a little bare. Are you planning to reveal things at a later date? If not, it would be nice to flesh it out slightly more. 2. The special skill is alright but I'd like it scaled down slightly. Loose the defense increase and add a limitation. AgentFallenSoul's character has a similar ability but included "It last for thirty seconds, after which he is rendered useless and must either pull out of battle or die". Could you also say how you acquired it (weapon, quest, bug, etc.) please. --- @AgentFallenSoul Speaking of the devil! AoT reference was not subtle! In regards to Aren: 1. Your special skill sounds interesting, however it reads as though to re-use she needs only to sheath her blade. I'd rather there be a cool-down time or a limit to the amount uses per fight. 2. Unless your character has an equipment skill (leather, light metal or heavy metal) they cannot use armour. Please could everyone remember this. In regards to Jaegar: 1. Could I be a pain and ask you to rename the set/skill from 'Thingy's Berserker' to 'Thingy's Somethingelse'? Just to avoid confusion with Hawke's Beserker Spear and Beserker Skill. Otherwise the skill is fine, just be cautious not to make it OP during the rp. --- @LokiLeo Ah, bummer! I normally save my CS on a Word Document in case of situations like this. --- ### First post is written, albeit poorly. I'm not sure whether I should post it with the current formatting or not.