Tekno, the way u referred to Nightmare's character is a little odd. Your rping the principal in third person, but then referring to Nightmare's character as "you and your". Its kinda awkward. Shouldn't it be like..for example...

The principal lifted his head up and looked at the boy eyes intently, rummaging through the papers before handing them to him. 

(Instead you did it like...)

The principal lifted his head and looked at your eyes intently, rummaging through the papers before handing them to you. 

Idk, I'm sorry if im whining. Its just very weird and incoherent for me. LOL