What I think Vicier meant by,

> You're CS is okay, though there are a few things that I just want to clarify. Was he sent to earth when he was five? Or Three? And who are his parents, ect.
> Also, could you please add more information to your "Biography (before earth)" as right now, it doesn't give us much of an idea about the character and the situations that led up to him being on earth.

would be to fill in the lesser details with meatier bits. You mentioned a King. King who? King Richard the Lionhearted? King Poo Face? Names are important in Fairy Tale Land. The (nameless) King's brother was Robin's father, great, what was his name and what kind of person was he? Was he the King's royal archer? War leader/general? Did he not live in royalty like his brother did and raised his family by means of his own?

You also mentioned that the King sent his son with Robin to Earth... what was this for? Who is his son? Will Scarlett? Morgan Freeman? Why did his son go through? Were you planning on having them meet up later? Were Robin and the King's son close?

I know its a lot but it's important information. I could keep going on and on and on about different 'tasty meaty bits' you can put in but as a writer, you should strive to find those points on your own :) it can be fun :) have fun with it :)