Quick note Shadow, since I don't have a lot of time to acept you yet. Try reading your application out loud. If you see a comma, take a small breath, periods let you take big ones. Get it? Wherever you try to take a breath, that's probably supposed to be a comma there. It's just one of those things that make your posts look a lot more mature, no matter what your writing skills are. Please go through that a little bit, then add in some commas. I'll be back later to look over it again. Oh, by the way, if you're wondering the time period is different than today slightly. No BF3 or 4 if you're wondering, ;) Just noting that since you like to by build computers I also know it was in the rules not to make these characters... but that's mainly to avoid people thinking about the their character before they post. So far it's worked, and not everyone is savvy with computers!