Truly? Could it really be possible?  
Single line breaks?  
I'm so happy! (Even if the method by which they are made is still somewhat awkward, but I suppose it's not worse than the // I'm used to from university-work.)

I have no problems with your character either, Veridis; I'll add it to the list in the OP shortly. But to reiterate Shien's question, how do you intend to introduce Kaedan to the group, and is it still your intention to have him join up with Aemoten's group (the one in Zerul)?  
EDIT: _facepalm_ Except I can't edit posts made before this new system, so I can't change the OP. Yay...

I swear there was one more thing I was supposed to comment on... Oh right; then I guess I'm next in the collab. I'll get a post together when I can.