>  Eventually, the shadow bursted apart, fading into black tendrils that drifted to the sky.
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> Ellis darted forward to the three shadows attacking the blue woman, slicing through the weakest one easily. The other two were quick work against both the woman and Ellis.

I can understand Ellis being capable of killing the weakened heartless but also killing three other who had not been weaked before? That's just overpowered. The Heartless which grappled onto Ellis would have been injured from being damaged by her attacks but I am not sure it would have died from it. Even if you could get away from the Shadow you would still have difficulty fighting off the other two heartless along with the third injured one. As I said above, it is just overpowered to kill not just one but four heartless in a single post.

> Got my post up as well. Hope it's okay!

It is really good.