Completely agree with Leos. On top of those modifications, I'd also like your sign up to be in accordance with ours and posted on our site - simply for conveniences sake. Your character does look interesting, and I look forward to seeing him in action. You will need to mention in your bio why your character wishes to join Dovahfeyn, and how he finds them while they're at rest. 
I'll get my post up tomorrow morning guys, so you won't have to wait long! :)