> OK souls and spirits. What's the big difference. Perhaps his clan calls them spirits. As for the boomerang thing. That picture demon suggested is still a boomerang. Just a metal bladed boomerang (much more like a ninja tool) just use it. Its a fancy weaponized boomerang so again no big deal. Well as for spirits it is kind of different. Definition wise they are pretty much the same. However, in writing it depends. As far as most anime goes a spirit is usually some kind of being comprised of the soul and other supernatural components. Souls are just souls. Generally they have no form, but they are the essence of what the person was. That's my opinion. It's not really even a big change, Also the boomerang was an idea. He doesn't need to change that. I just figured he might want something sharp. As of now his would be strong blunt weapons even with chakra enhancements. > Double post :p > > At least this character is manageable unlike diamond blizzard..... > > In my eyes he's just trying to tweak it just enough to prevent becoming op early on(mentioning limits for your abilities would assist greatly in that. As well as tweaking some terminology. > > Also if I may help, with spirit clone, perhaps they can interact with the environment on an intangible/spiritual level. Passing through obstacles repositioning etc. But upon contact with chakra(so any jutsu or trained taijutsu user) the clone takes on a physical form. Best of both worlds manageable it makes sense and its still your skill. Oh an yeah. I think the character is good, but I'm trying to just make sure he can't be too op. Cause otherwise he might as well be a jonin. Or Anbu... Point is I'm just trying to help fix it to fit the role play a little better. Hmmm that spirit idea could work... Possibly, if done right.