Your mutual friend is sorry for his sudden absence, life kind of happened rather arbitrarily. Though, that has been settled and should not happen again. Anyway character reviews here we go. You guys don't need to type any of this your CS, if you don't want you can just answer my questions here or PM them to me. Anyway once these questions are addressed we will be ready to go. 

**@Drake**

Okay, the I like the start and the idea works. But before I'm going to accept it I just need you to expand on her history a little bit more. The concept as a mercenary during the war works and I like it but I'm going to need some background on how she got experience with the power systems maybe a little bit about her work during the war, what she was doing exactly, maybe a little about her life on the outer edge as well life is hard out there and you know government has no time to deal with people out there.

 **@agentmanatee**

Hacker, that will be interesting. Getting his skills from working on farm tech is considerably kind of an odd way to go about it but it could work. Though to break into Alliance systems at fifteen would make him more or less a child prodigy. If that is the case well the Alliance mility sector would of just ripped him from his family there and then to _"integrate"_ him into the system, rather then send him to prison. Intergrating being more of a more fabulous case of brainwashing then anything else. 18 might work. The loose cannon, hating authority thing is fine but just be known that while he might of gotten away with flaunting his mouth before people in the squad may not like that and consequences may arise because of this. 

**@Ubermensch**

Your good so far, though I might like a little bit more on his background before he joined the Alliance. 

**@ShiningSector**

You have the same issue as Ubermensch basically what was his life like before he joined the Alliance. Everyone has a past.


**@DAWNSTAR**

You are all good! Formatting is pleasing, background is just long enough to get the general idea of where she comes from and where she is going. Because Mika has shown symptoms of PTSD in the past but has at least attempted to receive treatment... starting sanity is at 160 higher than an average citizen but lower than the will of an iron veteran.

**@Traitor**

The one question I have for you is how was Skye's relationship with her father? Anyway experienced leader, determined, saw active combat, experienced with death. I'm going to put you up at 200/200 Sanity. This probably won't last XD.