Mm, his character seems to go against the rules a bit and even be contrary to the plot. I feel if he revised it to be something like a 16th century soldier or something. But there's a lot more editing needed besides the age. The multiple forms and Lord Marshall of Dracula status. Not being in the castle with the others in any point of the history, a 'lady of the lake' turning out to be a vampire (How did she know he was coming? she couldn't wait too long without feeding). It just seems kind of generic to me :\