[quote=@The Silver Paladin] Also, another Latin grammar fix: If you're saying Puellae Magi, then that is Slaves of the mage. But if you want mage to be plural, then it would be Puellae Magorum. [/quote] Technically, the 'magi' in "Puella Magi" means "Deceiver", as in Kyubey the Deceiver. I don't know if "Magorum" means "Deceiver" in plural form though, and the only one doing any deceiving around in the story is purely Kyubey (and to a lesser extent, Kirei). Furthermore, the Masters controlling the Servants are innocent for the most parts, so calling the Servants their slaves is a bit of a stretch. [quote=@The Silver Paladin] Oh! And last thing: there are Magical girls in the Nasuverse! (Fate/Prisma Ilya Kaleid-Liner I believe it's called.) [/quote] That's a spin-off and an alternate reality; I'm not going to involve that. And besides, I've got enough on my hands already trying to work Fate/Stay Night [i]and[/i] Fate/Zero's canon alone into my RP; I don't want to muck it up by bringing in other spin-offs and sequels. It will be a mess, and I'm already having some trouble trying to think up of a way to ensure the Incubators' invasion would make sense in the Fate timeline. Which is why the RP will be delayed for a while. Having "Kyubey suddenly invades Fuyuki!" just sounds so cheap, especially with both the Church and the Mage's Association not doing much about this. I'm trying to work between either the idea of those two organisations discovering Kyubey and Kirei's schemes sixty years after the events of F/SN (would serve up interesting sub-plots about the Church discovering the fictitious nature of God and the MA discovering the futility of their magic compared to galaxy-destroying aliens), or the idea of a Holy Grail War set in the future, six hundred years after F/SN (this one deals more with the futility of struggling against an inevitable fate as slaves; the great length between F/SN and the RP is to drive home the point that after 600 years, no hero could rise up to save the day, despite the original Holy Grail War being ended after five Wars). All that being said, I'll try to get the OOC thread up by the end of this week. [quote=@RBYDark] [s]Actually relevant to the codex, if by 'abusive' you mean people like Shinji then Kyubey just graduated to the top of the 'worst people in the Nasuverse' list considering that the Magical Girls are supposed to be teenagers at oldest.[/s] [/quote] Well, Kyubey is already pretty detestable by everyone. :) And yes, it is as 'abusive' as you could imagine with teenage girls, Japanese stories, and a space-pimp involved. That creepy little ferret just discovered the pleasures of human sadism, after all. Think of it as something like Kotomine discovering the pleasure of enjoyment in Fate/Zero. I might come up with a more complex motivation for Kyubey in the future, but we'll see.