[quote=@Aura Lodestone]
My character is 100 years old so age should not be a problem. and I was not really offended just mostly confused by the question since there are so many others you could ask the same said question
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It's just I've role-played with lots of people who have English as a second or even third language, and they had writing styles similar to yours.

[quote=@Slendy]
Hobbies:   [s]killing cattle ,[/s] causing minor natural disasters and once in awhile killing someone for there soul.
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I'm pretty sure this conflicts with the second rule: "Do not be Overpowered, unfair or invincible with your character."

[quote=@Slendy] Gift of the Demon- is a ability  that probably every full blood basic demon has. The ability to fly, move at incredible speeds, lift beyond the weight of an elephant and drain the life out mortal creatures.[/quote]
As does this

[quote=@Slendy] The bad thing about this is that any item blessed by a priest or titled holy can easily make him powerless.[/quote]
What? Does a blessed item only have to exist for him to be powerless? Does it have to touch him? Do the effects last as long as it is touching, or do they remain afterwards for a set time? Is it perhaps proportional to the power and/or the length of time said item was touching?

[quote=@Slendy]Biography: larz is probably on of the oldest living things to be recorded in history.[/quote]
Second rule again. 

[quote=@Slendy]He was titled as a myth since no one has actually lived long enough to give a full description of Larz. The Myth states that there were once kingdoms in hell and verious powerful rulers. Larz was one of them and ruled over the void a small dark dot that was basically corrupted and swallowed up by evil. Years later Lucifer defeats the kingdoms and rebuilds hell from the ground up. Lucky Larz build a barrier to separate hell and the void. The myth continues on by saying Larz finally lost all he had when Lucifer confronts him and rips the void to shreds. In his final moments he consumed the rest of the void and removed his body from the realm of hell. The Myth ends with Larz dying in the earthly realm while he actually went into hiding.[/quote]
In fact, pretty much all of his bio seems in conflict with the second rule. Powerful demon ruler? It took the omnipotent embodiment of evil to defeat him?  Consumption of the entire realm he ruled over? Definitely conflict here.


Edit: On another note, I am currently working on a reply to your post MonkeyBusiness, sorry for the wait.