[quote=@The Grey Dust] The secret to making an impressive-looking post is really to describe only a few actions, then fill the rest with commentaries on what just happened prior to the post, and make internal suggestions to drive the plot for the person in the next post. If thee is any space remaining, simply add unnecessary details to various objects in the setting. [/quote] The master at work. But yes, that's a good strategy. I did try to leave big hints at plot development in my last post. I didn't do very much beautiful description, but I was in a rush. Just getting the action down had to suffice.