I'm not trying to speak any guff about your writing skills, but I generally find it's real hard to insert three characters at once into a currently-running game. I'd probably start with one and add more as your character got acclimated to the setting.

Oh, and just a reminder: post your CS [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/74771-massive-multiversal-crossover-interest-check-and-signups/ooc]here[/url] so it can be accepted.