Looks good. Only thing I would ask is that you clarify the last part where you state she sees humans as something else. Could you personify that a little so I understand completely? Other than that, all gravy! :) 

I've been busy today, so it's taken me longer than usual to reply. I don't know when the IC will start, as we still only have one CS posted, and one promised. If we have to run this with only two, that's fine with me if yall are cool with that. 

Let me know what you guys want to do.