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[quote=@Melkor]
@Dead Crusier

I understand, that makes sense. How should I descibe it then? Should I say that they used destructive magic? Also, I would like to see an example of the style section.
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I think what your CS could benefit from most would be more detail, especially pertaining to the Plane you've invented. Red magic and executions in a coliseum give me a very sort of Klingon feel to the Plane, or at least that culture within the Plane. I'll leave it up to you what the specifics happen to be.

I'll write a sample CS when I get off work tonight.
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Thank you for the feedback. I revised Alphazar's history.