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[quote=@Melkor]
Thank you for the feedback. I revised Alphazar's history.
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A vast improvement. Both your character and Mars' are accepted.

[@Apollosarcher] I'd recommend that your character take on a color. The only truly colorless Planeswalkers we've so far seen in canon were quite special cases. Just as recommendations, Blue is pretty much the go-to color for artifacts, and your character's personality gives me a sense for White.
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Well the reason's he's colorless was he came from a plane during a time where almost all the mana was gone, thus anyone there who relied on mana used colorless. Dominara was nearly dead at the time of his birth, so I was actually going to make him blue-white but I read more into it, he couldn't have based on lore. It does mean he knows about the great and powerful planeswalkers from before.