Alright, I got the duty of writing out the CS reviews. Before I go on, I don't mean to offend anyone 

[b]General Note:[/b] CS in the OOC is different from the one here. [u]That one is the "real" one, so if you could all revise into that, that'd be great.[/u] Any regulations regarding that will not be included in these reviews.

If I missed anything, the other guys'll probably come in and correct me.

[quote=@That AWFUL Guy]
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[*]Is the organic matter he manipulates limited to himself?
[*]How does your character's alchemy system work and how does he cast it?
[*]Other than the fact that he is capable of releasing electric shocks, is there any reason or necessity for the "unprotected technology goes haywire" bit?
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[quote=@Jinxlynx]
*Kyne snip*
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[*]What does "hide in shadows or move quickly between them" mean? 
[*]What power source does the gauntlet use to manifest its effect?
[*]What spells does she use?
[*]Mithril really shouldn't be "hard but flexible" considering to be hard you need to be unyielding, and that contradicts the flexible bit.
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[quote=@Jinxlynx]
*Senka snip*
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[*]Chi/Mana/Magic energy is all the same, and Earth has like, none, save for a few really, really isolated people. 
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[quote=@Noster]
*snip*
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[*]What's the system for your magic draining arrows?
[*]Specify what kind of magical arrows he has. I don't like "etc." when listing off equipment.
[*]How can someone physically weak be an archer? Competent long-range archery takes a lot of strength.
[*]No such thing as different types of magical energy, as mentioned previously
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[quote=@AliceInRedHeels]
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[*]Not having a lot of physical ability means you shouldn't be able to dodge and such
[*]What's the system for checking vitals and analyzing enemies?
[*]Being naturally smart =/= having access to tons of data. 
[*]Note that since her eyes were enhanced, and not her brain, she still reads at human speeds.
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[quote=@Slendy]
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[*]How does the bleeding work? He's an android not a cyborg
[*]Mechs are the highest tier of Earth weaponry, a first year should not be able to 1v1 multiple mechs and win. Yes, he loses his head, but the fact he still managed to kill [i]several[/i].
[*]The bit in the personality about rules following makes no sense. 
[*]Neither does your EMP negation. There is no anti-EMP energy.
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[quote=@drewccapp]
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[*]What qualifies as a machine for the sake of her hearing?
[*]Dude. That gauntlet has some seriously whack energy efficiency. And she made it herself. Think about that.
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@Veteran CSs: I yelled at you guys already.