[quote=@Caits]
I feel like I'm being bitchy with this, but as I said the only really important main problem I have is the fact that there isn't a clear back story as to where the dragon came from. If you read Shinobu's CS, you find that there is. 

It can't just be a wandering dragon. If you address this issue then I am happy to accept. But if you don't then we are just going around in circles.
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I can work another dragon into the story. Easily. And maybe I'll shift to poison so it's more unique. This should fix both problems. But I cannot do it right now. I'm having a get together with my family so it'll be a few hours.