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Does anybody want to post something constructive?
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If you change the dating system from "PPC" to "PCP", it will sound cooler because it will be like... PCP.

The map size is crazy-ridiculous. If one pixel is 250 km^2, that would mean your rivers, at their thinnest, are 250 km across. Which is pretty intense.

And also, how does an electrical musket work? Surely they figured out rifling and breech-loading before they figured out laser sights.
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To add: The map is offensive, speaking as a artist. The colors are offensively bright and over saturated. On top of that the text is difficult to read. Color tones on maps are hardly that vibrant, specially if you're going to have writing on them. The textures - though I can understand using them, to make them not as dull - only makes it worse by further saturating the colors and creating a heavy noise that's making the writing really hard to see.

I'd also criticize the whole concept of Steampunk, since it all too often comes off as a way to claim some sort of modern fantasy vibe. And is used in such a way the original concept of Steampunk as a science-fiction theme has been completely lost. It falls into the category of literary thought that if it has "punk" as an affix it's immediately "cool". It's just bland and lost now.
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But I like steampunk =(

Though I do have to say, you might want to dial down some of the tech. Technology tends to have implications of other potential technologies. Bioengineering would require either magic, or advanced computer technology. And if you have chemical engines, you probably don't use steam anymore, so you lose the steam in steampunk.