[quote=@thewizardguy]
The helicopters didn't fly over anything.... they were there since the beginning of the battle. They're quite literally in my first post with the Purge.

The bombs were supposed to signal a kind of ending to the fight scenes occurring, or at least on a larger scale. The battle is sufficiently scattered that there's no real way to tell who's winning and who's losing. The Purge are ripping through Newbloods like candy floss, and have suffered hardly any losses on the hands of the vampires. The few that have fallen are at the hands of the Olbloods and Matt.

Also, I'm pretty sure the top hatch would be locked for exactly this reason. But whatever. Tanks are going left and right, so whatever. Oh, and breaking machinery in a tank filled with highly flammable liquid is maybe not a good idea?

In any case, these are all just minor comments. However, Shikaru, I would like to comment that your Actions Per Post are a bit high for my taste, your characters tend to jump all over the place and do a whole bunch of stuff before people can respond.

Also, me and Wraith are thinking of a way we can have the story progress beyond this battle.
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Gonna categorize this:

Helicopters: They flew in from somewhere, they didn't just magically poof into exsistance.

Bombs: Wouldn't the bombs have simply blown everything into oblivion?

Tank: I can edit it to show he ripped it off if it makes it better.

Flammable liquif in tank: Wouldn't the liquid be stored in some kind of canisters and not simply sitting open?

Progression: Group chat with me on this through PM then or something. I'd really appreciate it instead of just deciding to change everything dramatically.