You misunderstand the purpose of my criticism. I was not claiming that you were "Plagiarizing", I was saying that I dislike characters who use unoriginal powers because it can BE plagiarism. I did not say you could not use that character, but I do request that you change the names of the powers and at least the name of the mark, so that it is not a direct link to the game in case we do get around to making a comic. I'm not ACCUSING you of anything, I'm pointing out flaws that I see, which is my job. I said nothing about your powers themselves, and I actually appreciate you trying to balance them right off the bat instead of waiting for us to tell you to, that shows foresight on your part and a consideration for other people's feelings. (Although I think it was unnecessary, since some of the powers in this RP are a bit over the top).

My one and only complaint about the character is that the power is taken from another game. I would say the same things to anybody who did that, including the GM herself.