[quote=@Rusalka] I'mma go git sum popcorn! [/quote] [s]i hate you for doing that before I got to do that[/s] _________________________________________________ [quote=@chukklehed] My one and only complaint about the character is that the power is taken from another game. [/quote] [s]I'm literally using another person's character, if you think about it.[/s] EDIT: [quote=@Avalant] Yes, we must accept the Fonz.... to be the Fonz is to be cool like the Fonz :D Like I said, I'm not taking anything personal, just pointing out what I perceived as "unreasonable" in the best light. I'm open to constructive criticism with reasonable claims. So then what should I change? I want to keep the basic concept of the powers, particularly the rats as it ties into what I have planned for various reveals of the backstory to my character and such. Any suggestions on how to alter the powers a bit more? I'm already workin on new names. [/quote] Hm... How about, instead of focusing more on Carv's ([s]yes im fking lazy screw you all[/s]) magic potential, you could perhaps focus on allowing her to mix some elements of her parkour abilities and her magic abilities. Or perhaps make her parkour abilities themselves strange! For example, you could let her sort of slither through walls that people would normally be unable to parkour through with her own summoned rats. Personally, mix-and-matching existing powers can actually bring out really weird stuff... and sometimes, really rare gems.