[quote=@TJByrum]
To me, I read some of the stuff the more advanced/experienced RPers write and I quickly come to the realization that I am nowhere as descriptive as they are.

Until I can start writing like those guys, I won't consider myself 'advanced'.
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This is an important part of writing well, but by no means the only aspect, nor to be exclusively used. Describing everything in laborious detail does not make you a good writer. In fact, I'd go so far as to say, describing [i]everything[/i] in laborious detail would probably make you a bad one.