Tentative example and some questions: Organization Name: Dawn Profession: (Uhh, organizations have professions?) Affiliation:(as in ties with someone else?) Leader(s): Grace Persons of Importance: Izanami, Izanagi, Ember, Eva Military and Civilian Assets: Hi-tech military equipment, eclipsing some nations. As a secret organization, they have very few soldiers and scientists, but only the very best are being recruited. Brief History: Formed by the one of the richest industrialists in the world, Grace predicted the strife that will engulf the war once Etherium supplies will become strained. Recruiting the best people of every field, she formed Dawn as a neutral power to completely understand Etherium, find a replacement for it or synthesize it, and manipulate nations from the shadows, and if need be, spill some blood to prevent potential wars. A few other questions/notes: 1.Etherium enables magic, right? If so, so is it like a focus you cast magic through? Does it have to be touched or consumed to unlock magic? 2.Do you want every nation to be player-made? While it does sound quite nice, not having a preset political situation will make the story hard to make and follow. 3.Do you have a clear direction this RP will go? As for now, it feels like there is none. While player-made nations and organizations are nice, (the latter I approve of), this RP currently feels kinda.... empty... without that "hook" that really catches peoples attention.