[quote=@Grey]
[quote=@Jedly]
Ello all, Grey's currently in Church, praying to his holy deity.  Should be on shortly.  Thank you for waiting on his critiques.
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Dang flabbit Jed, how are people going to think I'm dark and edgy now that they know I go to church?

Anywhooo....

[@The Fox Without] 
1) An crappy electric collar is still not what I would call adequate measure to restrain an inhuman death row inmate. 
2) Mana detection is a thing. Your concealment of presence spell is moot point.
3) I 'unno man, the bit about "reversing vampiric nature" just strikes me as really odd.
[@Card Captor]
Yeah, basically you don't need to justify having a human form as a unicorn. You can just become one with the unicorn.
[@Ryonara]
You're k.
[@BrodZ11711]
Sure.
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I think you missed me. Am I accepted or not?