[quote=@Spawnling] Well, I should rephrase, by concise I mean less all over the place with "AND NOW THIS STUDENT AND NOW THIS STUDENT AND NOW THI-" I rarely make terribly short posts if I can avoid it. I will let you know when Jackson and August actually interact with each other. So far looking fine to me. Definitely got the traumatized part down. [/quote] Cool, and I think that'll be an interesting interaction to say the least! August's attitude might put Jackson off a little at first, but not for the reasons you may think.