[quote=@KaelRavenheart] [quote]My character, Josephine, has the last name of Gray because she is Terry and Xander's sister. These are Penguin's character's. This was the last name we planned to use early on, so it was coincidental that there was another character with it. Many people in the real world have the same last name. Additionally, it's open for interpretation because their capabilities are still being discovered. Granted, they are broad; however, what the power is, is the name given. Their limits are posted. They're not demigods or anything major, yet they are restrictive, of course, in what they can do.[/quote] Hmm, I was unaware that your character was actually related. In that case, I have no qualms. As for the explanation, or lack thereof, I must say that while I understand your point about them still discovering their abilities, I still have to suggest that you put a bit more of a specification in your description. Otherwise people may assume, for example, that your necromancy character can talk to, summon, and control just about any kind of undead being or creature, and your molecule manipulation character, for all we know, can pretty much control anything under the sun. Your limitations are not really explaining the full limits. It would be like if I said, "My character has magic" and then put a limiter of "his mind magic doesn't work on humans and his elemental magic isn't too powerful". It leaves a lot of question open, that's all I'm saying. I'm not meaning to criticize here, I simply wish to understand what exactly they are able to do or not do in those fields. I don't need details, but an explanation would go a long way. [/quote] Don't worry about it buddy. If I feel the explanation's not good enough, I will tell them. I haven't been able to thoroughly look through some of the most recent but you don't have to worry about it. Speaking of which, @Nuttynad, what do you mean by holes? I'm having trouble understanding.