[quote=@Raijinslayer] [quote=@Hebigami Shiho] Nah, is a good read, and mostly my faukt xD [/quote] Glad you enjoyed it. Question for the group, how do you think I'm handling Xavier demon stuff(the voice in his head) and do you think his demon side should activate from the anger he's going to feel from when he sees Revan or should I hold it off? I'm leaning towards holding it off, but I wanted to get a group consensus on this. [/quote] As of now, I haven't paid too much attention to it, but I think perhaps, see how Revan acts and stuff. Overall, I'd say hold off from seeing and wait for something significant to be brought up. It's moments like that where the feeling are really impacted in both the character and the reader. In my opinion of course.