Cool, I was going to post again tonight but my house lost power for about five minutes. I wasn't able to save what I had been writing for the past couple of hours. Oh well, back to the drawing board. I'll probably just begin again in the morning due to the fact I'm a bit annoyed. You can go ahead and post your part two if you want to though. It'll give me something to read since I'm just not enjoying Forever Evil at the moment.