Guys, some feedback for this wallpaper will help me out nicely. Is there anything else I can do to improve this? (I'm making a wallpaper for a friend's fanfic)

[hider=Arc-Nemesis][img]http://i.imgur.com/ADUbUVj.png[/img][/hider]

Also, I will refrain from posting at the IC once that stuff I've been doing clears out. In the meantime, please do not wait for my characters to pop in sooner. I may eventually post with at least Saya because she's pretty easy to play as.