[@Aura Lodestone] bleak is absolutely fine, it's just the detailed worldbuilding that's slightly restrictive. What you've got now is great, and more personal to the character. Thanks! Approved. Please copy his CS to Characters.

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How big is the ship compared to a traditional Spanish war galleon? Just curious :P
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I ... have never seen a Spanish war galleon. Think cruise ship sized. It doesn't look like a sailing ship should. But it will be explained.

[@Antarctic Termite] Innocent is approved, please copy to Characters.