[quote=@Song Book]
What do you guys think of my empire? I think it looks pretty good for what i can tell. This is my first fully functioning nation rp so i don't exactly know.
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I personally think you have a pretty solid start right now. Some interesting ideas about what industries you want and so on. You don't have that many details and sections aren't done though, so I can't really give my opinion on whether I like it as a whole.