[quote=@SwordfishKnight]
It's a bit... bare. maybe add in a paragraph of personality, and backstory is coming later?

Also on the subject of weapons, only one is allowed, with my discretion deciding whether or not you can use another one later on.
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One moment. I'll fix them up.

EDIT:

Personality and weapon is fixed, but the Background will have to come later.