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This is what I have so far, the backstory and sample always give me trouble so I will get to those later. Otherwise tell me what you think.

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[B]| NAME(S):|[/B] 
Aiden Lawe
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[B]| ALIAS(ES):|[/B] 
Speedster (Name given by his mother)
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[B]| D.O.B.:|[/B] 
10-12-1988
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[B]| AGE:|[/B]
 26
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[B]| SEX:|[/B] 
Male
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[B]| SEXUALITY:|[/B] 
Heterosexual
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[B]| APPEARANCE:|[/B] 
Aiden is a thin and lithe young man standing around six feet with an impressive wingspan (both arms and legs). His cold steely blue eyes and arrogant smirk prove the fact that he has an attitude and arrogance a mile long. Aiden keeps his hair short and generally slicked back.
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[B]| H-CLASS:|[/B] 
Mercury 
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[B]| ABILITIES: |[/B]
 Aiden’s first and foremost talent is speed. Although he has never accurately tested the limits of his abilities he is certain that he can break the sound barrier with little or no effort (at least before the outbreak). Along with his ungodly speed (or rather because of it) Aiden can move fast enough to leave a temporary image of himself behind him. 
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[B]| LIMITATIONS: |[/B] 
On top of other things, Aiden is human and humans get tired. While it does take him longer to become exhausted he will eventually wear himself down. Because he doesn’t have access to materials that don’t wear down Aiden is frequently going through pairs of clothes and shoes so he has to either carry around spares in his backpack or go home.
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[B]| WEAKNESSES: |[/B] 
As stated earlier Aiden can and will succumb to exhaustion if he runs for too long. Also because of his speed if he were to trip and fall the damage would be equivalent to a car wreck at that speed without the car. While using his speed for hand to hand combat, while the blow will be devastating it will most likely hurt him as well. If Aiden’s speed and momentum are broken it takes him a minute to recover due to his body ‘catching up’ with his exhaustion. 
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[B]| APPLICATIONS: |[/B] 
The obvious application is that he can run REALLY REALLY fast. In light of that he is very to hit unless targeted by some other Hype ability. Offensively, using his speed and momentum, he can add extra power behind his punches and kicks. While this is not nearly as effective as someone with an Atlas H-type, it is more than enough to feel like getting hit by a car. From a ranged perspective anything that he throw (that he can pick up within reason) can turn into a highspeed projectile.
Defensively…he just runs REALLY REALLY fast.
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[B]| SKILLS: |[/B]
[B]Collegiate Level Track Athlete [/B]- Because of his natural affinity for running it’s only natural that Aiden followed track as his pass time.
[B]Silver Tongued [/B]- While some don’t consider this a real skill Aiden has made a living on making other believe his every word.
[B]Downtown Brawler[/B]- By no means is he a Shaolin master kung-fu artist, he is known to be able to fight his way out of a situation.
[B]Smart-Ass[/B]- Not entirely different from his Sliver Tongue, Aiden relishes in tormenting the minds of those around him, not in an evil way…just to piss everyone off.
 
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[B]| EQUIPMENT: |[/B]
1x Backpack (clothes, shoes, cell phone, money…anything that he might need without being too heavy
1x Pair of Aviator Goggles (He says they look cooler)
What he carries depends on what he thinks he will need and will fit in his backpack without slowing him down.
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[B]| BACKSTORY: |[/B]
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[B]| SAMPLE POST: |[/B]
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[B]| NOTES: |[/B]
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Alright while we don't have too much to say on the sheet in its current state we do have one issue.

If Aiden has never tested his powers how can he be so sure he can break the sound barrier? Two, breaking the sound barrier at a street level would be rather destructive especially in close quarters. Weaknesses and limitations are good, we like the fact that is speed is almost as harmful to him as it is to anyone he targets. We're a little iffy on the brawling skill but we can't say too much about it as the backstory is currently empty and could justify it.