[quote=@Commodore Robot]
Well alrighty, I think I've got the Dominion in an approvable state. I will add more detail to the military section at some point, but I think I outlined that enough to get a verdict in.
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My only issue that stands is the 80 systems mentioned. THat is a bit of a ridiculous number of systems for my taste. Maybe in the future but not now.