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I’m like…. Emotionally compromised after finishing this story
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When I remembered what Kevra's name meant I just laid my head down on my desk and cried. 

Anyways, thanks so much for you review!

I do have to say, my obsession with commas is so, so bad. You see, I generally don't like short sentences unless the point of them being short is to be jarring (Like in that one conversation that was nothing but "__, Sir! *Question* __, Sir!"). As such, I apply commas liberally everywhere ever. Including places where colons, semicolons, periods, parentheses, and hyphens should go. This time, I managed to cut down on hyphen and parentheses commas, but my brain still screams in protest when I write a sentence that doesn't include at least one comma.

I also used incorrect quotation... etiquette? I have no idea what it's called. Which tells you how I feel about it.

But THANK YOU so much for telling me how you felt about my characters! When I'm really into the story, I can put myself in my character's shoes, something which I always thought made me write better. However, I never actually had anyone comment on my characters being good or bad. So it's nice to know that being able to temporarily become my character is actually useful.

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And thanks for yours!

I honestly thought that sci-fi WW2 was somewhat common, but maybe that's just because I'm the kind of person that constantly draws similarities between WW2 and sci-fi things that involve, you know, weapons in general.

I must say, I did actually consider publishing this. However, I decided that entering a contest on a roleplay forum is probably something I wanted to do before becoming a published author. 

I'll try to write some reviews, but I'll be busy doing nothing. Since I got about five to four hours of sleep while writing this, I want to relax before doing anything ever again.