[quote=@IceHeart] I would have preferred you put it in the OOC for my approval before posting in the character thread. Keep that in mind. Race doesn't really make any sense, the demon part at least as demons are different species, plus the fact that Namekians reproduce asexually so there is no chance of cross-breeding. I'd change it to just Namekian/Cyborg. Now for the move list, it really just feels like you took a bunch of moves from the series and slapped them together, not necessarily bad but why on earth would you have Kamehameha and Galick Gun? Also no real need to include flight, if you didn't have that ability, now that would be something of note. Fix the sheet up a bit then I'll probably approve. [/quote] My mistake, I thought the Character section was the spot to post my biography directly. Sorry about that, but the rest was dealt with. Using the Kamehameha and Galick gun is very possible, just not likely. I removed Galick gun regardless, it just flows better to have one or the other. These are the signature moves anyway, so I suppose "flight" was also a poor add-on.