[quote=@Trinais] I personally think this character can be salvaged. If I may offer my advice? Cut out the wormhole power or severely limit it, like, more than it is. I like the idea of him being a soul in a constructed body. Like a Frankenstein's monster, almost! With that in mind, maybe his soul and his mind don't jive as well. He's not dumb, but almost sociopathic in that he doesn't really care how other people view his actions. So when Arachne says "Yo, you shouldn't have murdered [b][i]all five[/i][/b] of the Magician's guards," he might shrug and say "They were in the way and you said no witnesses. Now you'll have five fewer enemies. And I cleaned up the bodies." But when someone or something hits home, he still displays emotions about it. Finally, the Prophets add a great layer of mystery of to the character. Keep them in your back pocket for a character twist somewhere down the line! Take it all or leave it as you like. [/quote] You sir(or ma'am), are awesome. I'm in a bit of a slump cause I created this character but my creativity is actively going elsewhere. My only issue is that I've tried and failed at emotionless characters before, but I'm sure I can make do. Would severely limiting the wormhole ability be satisfied by making it only teleport to locations within sight? Or through objects? And reducing range of course... ...may need some more duct tape though...