[@Trinais], I've taken your suggestions into account and have remodeled my character. Please alert me should anything else remain an issue. It's been over a year since I've made an RP character so I'm a little rusty...that, and I never considered myself all that great or fond of writing out character personalities and/or histories...

I guess that's dependant on the RP, though...

If this revision doesn't work I have...well...one other suitable character. Suitable, at least, for opposing Nemsemet.