[quote=@ArkmageddonCat]
[@Trinais], I've taken your suggestions into account and have remodeled my character. Please alert me should anything else remain an issue. It's been over a year since I've made an RP character so I'm a little rusty...that, and I never considered myself all that great or fond of writing out character personalities and/or histories...

I guess that's dependant on the RP, though...

If this revision doesn't work I have...well...one other suitable character. Suitable, at least, for opposing Nemsemet.
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Well, my other big problem, upon review, is that the character doesn't really relate back to a discernible mythology or superstition, in addition to still kind of overlapping too much with teapotshark's character, Beth. I think if you have another concept, it might be best to try that one out, keeping in mind that it's best to sort of ground the character in some sort of myth. The myth doesn't have to be entirely (or mostly) accurate, but there should be a gram of truth in there. 

[quote=@Necrophage]
If there's still room I would like to call a spot. Is there? Turn me away if there's too many. I won't be offended.

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It's still open, though it's starting to get unwieldy, so I'll be cutting it off real soon here.

Incidentally, character development hooks I came up with were a clued-in mortal. People that know about the supernatural do exist. While the Court doesn't want their existence in general knowledge, it doesn't molest relatives or others that are clued in out of hand, though such mortals may be warned or dissuaded from spilling the beans to the press; often, the retaliation savages their careers and reputations, and may just well land them in jail, because the Court plays dirty, has lots of sources and is very adept at subversion. On the other hand, the Court protect members from harm in cases where they have a feud with said mortal -- it concerns itself with keeping the secret of the supernatural unknown to the bulk of humanity and punishing unnecessary exposure. That means that personal disputes, including violence, are only really a Court matter when the Court finds itself compromised to the larger world; it swoops in to get rid of security cam footage, hush up the witnesses and clean up the mess in general and then punishes the offender for their deed.

In short, the clued-in mortal might well be a very adept supernatural hunter that is still just mortal. Then again, Frank Castle ([url=http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Punisher]the Punisher[/url]) is 'just' mortal and he's a dangerous badass of the highest order.

Just a thought on character ideas.