[quote=@Silver Fox] CaTony is interesting simply because they are so opposite. And Cat seems to enjoy taking advantage of it and messing with Tony. As for the Fuel Run, I was just waiting for the confrontation between the gang and our group. XD but not too sure how it plays out [/quote] I would completely agree with the CaTony info there xD Ah ok, sorry I'll try and give you some action to respond to ^^ [quote=@teapotshark] When in doubt, throw in some action? The gang and the survivors proposes an excellent plot device. There can be confrontation between the two, or you can go an entirely different route and toss in some walking dead to scare the crap out of them both. How well can these groups collect supplies when they're under attack? If it's going stale, make it more exciting. And congrats [@FaithsRose] for getting into your top choice uni! [/quote] That is usually my policy ^^' You're absolutely right of course, sorry had a bit of a stumble there >.< I'm feeling responsible for it being so hard for Rarity to jump back in to the story, was hoping it wasn't because of the storyline we've got going on ^^' Thank you! :D [quote=@MistressCyanide] I would not say that, I just don't feel I need to rewrite what I have done before. Anyway it is far from stale, you just got to get the blood flowing via a knife fight, gun fight or worse come to worse a human vs human vs zombie fight. [/quote] Ah I see, thank you for clarifying that for me ^^' Perfect ideas ^^ I'll try my best to get some action flowing through! Might even incorporate all of those ideas xD Head is back in the game now ^^ This'll be my first time writing action scenes/posts with 'normal humans', I'll give it my best shot <.<' Just let me know if it seems...weird ^^'