[quote=@Rune_Alchemist] ....Well, I see no glaring problems, aside from the history being rather...bare xD Couldn't have even wrote a paragraph, eh?~ xP But I'll let it slide. Okay, so he's good then. Also, since he knows martial arts, Abigail is gonna want to learn so she'll be pestering him about it~ xD They also have similar tastes in pokemon, it seems xD Before you post it though, wait until Bunny gives you the go-ahead. She might want you to add a bit to the history~ xP [/quote] You're acting like I'm some sort of psychopath! And I'm not! Only Melody is... XD Honestly, I'm tired of nagging today, and I just ran 3 miles with the softball team, so... yeah. Lots of asthmatic wheezing was involved. But I made it! Y'know, Drummer, it's super hard to keep flicking back to page 3, so why don't you post it and edit from there? It's not like we're rejecting any of you guys. I'll take another look at it later, when I get back to my room.