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Username: Jollan 
 Character Name: Garsin 
 Character Age: 32 
 Character Gender: male

 Appearance: Though, make his hair darker and ignore the weapons. [hider][IMG]http://i1360.photobucket.com/albums/r657/Jollan1/characters%20for%20rp/6077e98ce9f58c893a2c5bbdee043f33%201_zpspex85eiy.jpg~original[/IMG][/hider]
 Fourth Dimensional Power: sight and sound
 Bio: From a foreign family, but raised in Japan. [u][b]Garsin used to be part of Team Alpha.[/b][/u] Ever since he had his operation, he had found that he could see things other people couldn't, but it was written off as impossible because, originally, he was told he had amplified taste. However, it wasn't until his home was attacked and family killed by forth dimensional creatures, that his power was re-evaluated to confirm he had the power of sight, not taste, and surprisingly enough he was starting to develop sound as well.The mistake was from a mix-up in documents. Due to this, Garsin was annexed from civilian society and placed under lockdown for his and others' safety until he was needed by Team Alpha. Though he is in an underground cell, it is made quite cozy like a small cabin on the inside with fake windows that are screens that display the outdoors. [u][b]His was involved in the first military engagements against the strange creatures as a field medic.[/b][/u] Loss after loss, however, had him retire early. [u][b]That was when Team Alpha picked him up. However, after being part of the group for a little while one of the few freinds he had was horridly injured on the field.[/b][/u] When asked to leave him, Garsin disobeyed orders and tended to the man's injuries and extracted him as well. He was promptly fired upon his return, but Garsin quickly shot back, saying that it was fine by him because if their weapons weren't such crap that they wouldn't have been in that situation in the first place! After so much death and failure, he decided he would stay in his "cabin" until he finally died. But as fate would have it, that would soon change as well...

WHEN DEPLOYED: He is equipped with a heavy two handed energy sword (think phantasy star) and a sidewinder-like heavy gun (like the weapon on titanfall, but uses bullets), both magnetically held onto his back. He also carries extra energy cells for his blade. He also has a medical satchel that hangs at the back of his belt. His sword can last a bit on one cell, but has a special ability to turn into an energy hammer. once it is in hammer mode, he can deal a devastating attack but it eats up the whole cell on contact. He carries a total of 5 energy cells. one already loaded, and four extra.
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Okay, I like this a lot better! I was going to point an issue out before... but later on, it fixes that.

I will say that mentioning he was part of Team Alpha before mentioning he used to be in the military is a little confusing. I have bolded and underlined those parts in the quote for you to spot them easier.

So, let me get this straight. Garsin was part of the military cell trying to take out the monsters (That all failed), back when they thought he had the power of taste. Then, his home was destroyed, at which point they found out he had Sight, and not taste. Some time later, maybe around the same time, he also had Sound. At which point the secret facility discovered him (They are only interested in people with multiple powers, and ALL people with more than one end up with all of them at some point), and then assigned him to team Alpha.

If all of that is correct, then you are ready to be accepted! We'll, after you read the rules too.