This concept has the mark of personal investment and effort in it as a fairly original idea with origins from good, solid material, thus I commend you and you've won my interest.

I would like to see more of your in depth analysis of your world, especially magic and the forms it takes and what role it has in the world, if at all. I am not fond of fantasies where magic is overwhelming as it is in many. That said, I await the out-of-character piece.