[quote=@Apokalipse] 1-- One, she needs to have one more elective. 2-- Two, at SWI, there are no thestrals or carriages and I have not decided if there is going to be a hat for deciding the houses. 3-- Thirdly, she seems to be a bit of a special snowflake what with the having traits of every house, witnessing death, her mom going insane, her dad becoming distant, and showing signs at a young age. It's too much. Limit it, please. 4-- Also, for the choice of her being a Rain Bird, I feel as if she will either be a Nolka Nari or a Azeban, not even close to being a Rain bird. If you want her to be a rain bird, then you might want to make her less sly and focus more on loyalty - which I read that she doesn't have much towards others other than family - and hardworking. [/quote] [u][i][b]1[/b][/i][/u] -- Added [i][u][b]2[/b][/u][/i] -- Fixed [b][u][i]3[/i][/u][/b] -- [u]"Having traits of every house"[/u] -- Read 4 below please [u]"witnessing death"[/u] - Deleted, since that was more just an explanation for seeing the thestrals [u] "her mom going insane"[/u] -- I just wanted one sad/dark/interesting family/life thing in there or then her whole life would have been obnoxiously perfect. [u]"her dad becoming distant"[/u] - Kind of what happens to a guy when the love of his life/wife is forever insane, grief/blame and so on. [u]"showing signs at a young age"[/u]. - some wizards do and some dont, like some babies walk before others, some learn to talk fast. Thats all I meant by it. [b][i][u]4[/u][/i][/b] -- I added more on to this, so everyone can comprehend what I was going for and meant. No one really fits perfectly and completely in one category, they just show more aptitude for one then others, or are more prone to acting and seeing things a certain way then another. And I have read/watch the books/movies, and have scoured the harry potter wikia (and pottermore) just to make sure on this. But during the sorting ceremony the child opinion/choice towards which house they end up in weight heavily on the decision. Like Harry being could have been Slytherin, Hermione could have been ravenclaw, and Luna is kinda of out of the box anyway. But I can change from Rain Bird to somthing else if you see a problem.