Not a problem. I tend to be short when I first start posting myself. It takes me a while to work out all the kinks with the characters and my partner. Then I start posting longer stuff. :) So, it's all good.[quote=Orynae]I also realized that a strait of water is not a "straight". So the channel between the two landmasses is actually the Niriod Strait. Should I fix it on the map?[/quote]Almost didn't see these. Umm, I don't think it matters too much. If you wanted to, you could. [quote=Orynae]How long do Elves live? When do they become adults? For that matter, how long do dwarves live, and nature spirits?[/quote]Elves, let say they live the standard "forever" or a "long time" So maybe 500-1000? Meh.
Dwarves, maybe 200 max?
Nature spirits, depends. If it's a naiad, as long as their tree. Water spirits probably live for a really long time, like elf long.

And I'm working on the logistics of my reply. I should have it up tomorrow.

EDIT: And it's Mordechai not Caden who's not new to the White Shield. Caden is brand spanking new. Mordechai's been around for a while, like a year or two, but not long enough to be a veteran. I fixed this everywhere.

PS: I'll probably run through all my character's POV just to start getting a feel from them before I pick one, or switch to having them all in the same post.