Seeing the very helpful reviews made me realize what I thought in the back of my mind; that my stories were a little rushed and definitely too raw. I did do em in roughly a quick run each, I think 20 minutes to an hour? I hope I can devote myself to putting more effort into stories I write in the future, but a nagging lack of devotion has me convinced otherwise xD Thanks again for all the helpful reviews and for confirming my suspicions and errors