well there is one part here that Un type in that says that the note with the magic revealing the hidden magic society will reveal itself once the person with magic touches it even if you don't know you are magic or the power hasn't a waken yet... but I want that surprise factor, like I have my twins who are children of nephilims yet their powers isn't awaken yet I want them to be surprised or maybe other who as well to have that part where they can be like "Woah sh--- I can blow stuff up!" I don't want to change much on what un Type but just that part is making go confused... how do I keep the surprise factor yet with that note with the magical ink. its defiantly a hard one.... maybe revising this text would help? "You usually know this gift as "magic", "superpowers", "psychic abilities", or whatever mumbo jumbo party trick associates with those. Or you don't have a power as you believe, but something strange inside you caused that ink to appear in your eyes, and you actually have a power but you haven't used it yet. It's not even possible that you absolutely have no power yet you even managed to read that secret society letter, because you really must have something strange in you to have seen it."